Comments for Elixir Diamas and The Repenting Were™© http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com The epic anthology of Listya Widyasari's tale masterpieces (edited by: BerserkFox) Sun, 03 Aug 2008 08:03:56 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by atmoriadaviouh http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-17 atmoriadaviouh Sun, 03 Aug 2008 08:03:56 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-17 Thank you Thank you

]]> Comment on Chapter Two: The Boy and The Silvery White Dog by Paulin http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/30/chapter-two-the-boy-and-the-white-silvery-dog/#comment-16 Paulin Wed, 23 Jul 2008 16:02:12 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-16 This is cool as story! Just love it This is cool as story! Just love it

]]> Comment on Chapter Two: The Boy and The Silvery White Dog by peter http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/30/chapter-two-the-boy-and-the-white-silvery-dog/#comment-15 peter Sun, 06 Jul 2008 05:22:32 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-15 welll the story was very tense frombeginning to end but near the finish it began a happy ending to finish with a surprising climax.. welll the story was very tense frombeginning to end but near the finish it began a happy ending to finish with a surprising climax..

]]> Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by Guardian Angel http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-14 Guardian Angel Sat, 05 Jul 2008 01:37:16 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-14 Hey! Im lianjie.Your story is fasincating and wonderful.I believe everyday of your life will be filled with amazing stories and it goes a long fruitful way. Hey! Im lianjie.Your story is fasincating and wonderful.I believe everyday of your life will be filled with amazing stories and it goes a long fruitful way.

]]> Comment on Chapter Two: The Boy and The Silvery White Dog by hebat http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/30/chapter-two-the-boy-and-the-white-silvery-dog/#comment-13 hebat Thu, 03 Jul 2008 08:51:16 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-13 kayana baru taon depan nih ada sambungan.. tape deghhh.... kayana baru taon depan nih ada sambungan..
tape deghhh….

]]> Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by hebat http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-12 hebat Thu, 03 Jul 2008 08:49:30 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-12 cerita apaan seh inih?? teu ngarti saiah mah.. castor?? oli castor iaahh?? hihihihihi.. cerita apaan seh inih?? teu ngarti saiah mah..
castor?? oli castor iaahh?? hihihihihi..

]]> Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by peter http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-11 peter Wed, 02 Jul 2008 12:01:50 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-11 Considering that english is not your first language then your grammer is pretty good...but where did you get a name like "Castor " it an unusual name but fits in with this erry story...and is it based on real life? We will be waiting with baited breath for next chapter... Considering that english is not your first language then your grammer is pretty good…but where did you get a name like “Castor ” it an unusual name but fits in with this erry story…and is it based on real life? We will be waiting with baited breath for next chapter…

]]> Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by sandip http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-10 sandip Wed, 02 Jul 2008 11:20:55 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-10 Phentastic story, no comments pls Phentastic story, no comments pls

]]> Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by budd21 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-9 budd21 Wed, 02 Jul 2008 06:58:39 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-9 wow.. nice to have story like this. i really like something supranatural n weird stuff. nice work to mr. BerserkFox and Liz. well .. i`m gonna say from what I read. i don`t know where the story will go, but at first chapter it seems so revealed about this werewolf, this kinda unsuprised for reader. well its only in my opinion, i really like something twisted, mistery and hidden. the reader would be curious and continue to read all the chapter. but most of all... its nice and cant wait for the next chapter.... go tiger! .... good job Liz & mr BerserkFox :D wow.. nice to have story like this. i really like something supranatural n weird stuff. nice work to mr. BerserkFox and Liz. well .. i`m gonna say from what I read. i don`t know where the story will go, but at first chapter it seems so revealed about this werewolf, this kinda unsuprised for reader. well its only in my opinion, i really like something twisted, mistery and hidden. the reader would be curious and continue to read all the chapter. but most of all… its nice and cant wait for the next chapter…. go tiger! ….

good job Liz & mr BerserkFox :D

]]> Comment on Chapter One: The Unforgiven by Ashira http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/2008/06/28/chapter-one-the-unforgiven/#comment-8 Ashira Wed, 02 Jul 2008 04:59:30 +0000 http://elixirdiamas.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-8 im going to be harsh... sorry but thats the way i am when i leave comments concerning writing... the editing was bad with both grammer slips misplacements of nouns and the like... it also lacked proper decriptivness all around... i felt like i was stumbling around blind onl vaguely aware of anything going on around me... it has a good premise but these two things are weighing it down... as i said... it is a decent concept i will give it that... but the grammer and descriptives need polished a bit more... im going to be harsh… sorry but thats the way i am when i leave comments concerning writing… the editing was bad with both grammer slips misplacements of nouns and the like… it also lacked proper decriptivness all around… i felt like i was stumbling around blind onl vaguely aware of anything going on around me… it has a good premise but these two things are weighing it down… as i said… it is a decent concept i will give it that… but the grammer and descriptives need polished a bit more…

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