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		<title>Chapter Two: The Boy and The Silvery White Dog</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[ Three Years later&#8230;
 
It was such a fine cheerful morning, When the villagers of Bramaria were gathering the village square celebrating the departing of the chief&#8217;s son and his newlywed.. Samantha , the most beautiful girl in town,  and Tom ,the very lucky bachelor,  would soon  leave for their honeymoon. A big happy grin was shown [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=elixirdiamas.wordpress.com&blog=4076212&post=6&subd=elixirdiamas&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><h2 style="margin:12pt 0 3pt;"><em><span style="font-size:large;"><span style="font-family:Cambria;"><span lang="EN-US"><span> </span></span></span></span></em><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">Three Years later&#8230;</span></span></span></h2>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">It was such a fine cheerful morning, When </span>the<span lang="EN-US"> villagers of Bramaria were gathering the village square celebrating the departing of the chief&#8217;s son and his newlywed.. Samantha , the most beautiful girl in town,<span>  </span>and Tom ,the very lucky bachelor, <span> </span>would soon <span> </span>leave for their honeymoon. A big happy grin was shown over Tom’s face as he hugged her and waved at the crowd. The crowd cheered and sprayed a drink upon them. Everyone </span>was<span lang="EN-US"> happy though, except for <span> </span>a family that ran for Balerote farm seemed to have their own business. They had something else more important to do at home than saluting the newly weds.</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">Mr. Barney Beaumonde had been three years running the Balerote Farm, nurturing fresh fruits and vegetables from its soil and keeping it save from stray dogs any kind from reaching his barn. He was a very nice man and he shared the farm with Broombicks. He could work at farm all day, taking care of his sheep, horse and chickens while he’d let Broombicks family to do the farming and share</span><span>d</span><span lang="EN-US"> the harvestings the other day. They were quite prosperous at that time as Balerote seemed to pay them fair enough for the efforts.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Barney!!” barked a woman coming out from the kitchen overlooking the farm. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">“Yes!” He replies while giving the fork to Broombicks. He look</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> at his wife as He walked into the kitchen just as Julianne, the six years old girl, came out from it and bumped into him. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Wow…wow,” he held the girl. “Where are you going?”</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">“I’m going to the river today. I want to collect some flowers for Aunt Cherie, she’ll be here very soon,” Julianne said as she look</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> at her father.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“No, I won’t allow. Not when your brother is gone. Now where is he?” he looked around. “Ashley! Where are you, boy! Ashley!” </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Ah! I saw him walking to the barn just about an hour ago,” said Broombicks. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Thank you, George,” he said while walking to the barn. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Barney!!!” barked his wife again. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Yes?!” replied him while looking at his wife from distance. His wife beckoned him to come inside the kitchen again, meaning that she urgently needed help. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">He sighed and walked back again to the kitchen. He passed by his daughter and said, “You should wake him up and ask him to go with you. Remember, don’t go alone to the river, understand?” and so he entered the kitchen.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">“Yes dad.” <span> </span>Julianne said as she quickly r</span><span>an</span><span lang="EN-US"> outside.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">She head</span><span>ed</span><span> <span lang="EN-US">to the barn, looking for her brother who was found sleeping on the piles of hay. “Ashley!” she roused him, shaking his arm forcefully. But he seemed to enjoy his sleep very much.</span></span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">Then she sigh</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> as she g</span><span>ave</span><span lang="EN-US"> up waking him up and went to the river alone. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">It was much quieter at the river this time since the crowd was centered at the square. She pick</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> some flowers, near the hill, until she saw something interesting at the river side. She rushed to go see what it </span><span>wa</span><span lang="EN-US">s. There was a nest in a tree on the very far branch, not a strong branch though – that she would fall directly into the river below if it gave way. She climbed the tree up till she neared the nest. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">There were three little newly born chicks squeaking.<span>  </span>She was at awe until the sound of wood cracking interrupted the moment. The branch seemed not be able to hold her weight any longer. It was going to break quickly if she made any sudden movements. She was as petrified as she couldn’t say anything or even to scream for help. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">At that moment, she heard a barking dog came near. She saw far below, the dog had very clean </span><span>white</span><span lang="EN-US"> silvery fur and there was also a young boy about eight, standing and looking at her calmly.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">The noise of cracking wood was heard again as the branch she was sitting on, began to give way.<span>  </span></span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">“Help me,” she plead</span><span>ed</span><span> <span lang="EN-US">as she start</span></span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> to cry. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">A nearby boy heard her cried for help and immediately rushed toward her direction with his dog. He found a young girl in the tree and the branch she was sitting was giving away.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">The boy climbed up the tree very fast, as if he had been trained climbing up trees since he was two. He stopped at the branch’s side and reache</span><span>d</span><span lang="EN-US"> his hand towards her. His dog just s</span><span>at</span><span lang="EN-US"> and wait</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> as the event unfold</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US">.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">“Grab my hand!” he yell</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US">, trying desperately to reach her. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">She reached out and grabbed his hand. Then begin crawling slowly to the trunk of the tree. She turn</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> her head towards the nest and trie</span><span>d</span><span lang="EN-US"> to reach for it.<span>  </span>“The Nest, I can’t leave them to fall into the river.” </span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">The boy grip</span><span>ped</span><span lang="EN-US"> her and tries to lead to the trunk of the tree.”I’ll get the nest for you. Now quickly get down onto another branch,” he said, while maintaining his grip on her arm and making sure that she would get down safely. Nevertheless, she climbed the other strong branch next to the nearly fallen branch.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Please, get the nest, please,” she pleaded and started crying again. </span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">“Dang!” he complained as he climbed up and crawled carefully on the nearly fallen branch to take the nest.<span>  </span>The Branch ma</span><span>de</span><span lang="EN-US"> cracking sound so badly this time as the branch was starting to fall down. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Here!” he shouted as he reached towards her to try to give her the nest. </span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">She grabbed the nest and crawled back as she began to witness the branch was falling into the river with the boy.<span>  </span>The dog barked repeatedly in panic. </span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“NO!!” she screamed. </span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">She climbed down the tree put the bird nest under, and ran quickly to the river where she saw the boy was trying to survive, for he couldn’t swim at all. The dog was too young and by its size, too little to swim down the river to save him. And so the girl, she couldn’t swim at all, all she could do at that time is just scream for help. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“See the light! See the light! I can’t swim, I’m sorry, see the light!” she cried. </span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">He went under water for a moment then came back up again, then went back under again. He tried to reach above. He could only hear her whimpering and saying something about the light. He was barely unconscious below, as he began to sink, but her fading voice and his barking dog made him snapped him out of it and tried to reach the light. He managed to get his head out of the water, gasping desperately for air and quickly sank again. A hand reaching him, but he couldn’t see who it was as He reached for the hand. Thanks to his efforts of struggling breathing air, he managed to get close to the river side. Julianne manage</span><span>d</span><span lang="EN-US"> to reach for him from the side of the river and grab</span><span>bed</span><span lang="EN-US"> his hand. <span> </span>She dragged the unconscious boy to the side. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Don’t die please!! I’ll go for help.” </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">She said as she panicked and ran off trying to calling for her brother to help the unconscious hero. She ran fast as she could, she made it to the barn and successfully roused her brother with her cold wet hands.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Help, someone is dying!”</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="EN-US">Ashley was half asleep but he managed to keep up with her running as she led him to the river side. “Don’t you know, you disturbed me!” He yell</span><span>ed</span><span lang="EN-US"> while running. </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;"> </span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;margin:0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">As they reached the riverside, the boy and the dog were already gone. The only trace that was left was White silvery hair from the boy’s dog.</span></span></span></p>
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		<title>Chapter One: The Unforgiven</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[It was a dark, foggy night when Castor heard the news about the curse. He was five years old when he was eavesdropped an argument in the living room. This is when his life changed and everything started going downhill. There was a great argument happening in the living room, he creepped towards the door [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=elixirdiamas.wordpress.com&blog=4076212&post=4&subd=elixirdiamas&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">It was a dark, foggy night when </span><span>Castor </span><span lang="IN">heard the news about the curse. He was </span><span>five years old when he</span> <span>was </span><span lang="IN">eavesdrop</span><span>ped</span> <span>an argument in</span><span lang="IN"> the living room</span><span>.</span> <span>This is </span><span lang="IN">when</span> <span>his life changed and everything </span><span lang="IN">started</span><span> going downhill</span><span lang="IN">. There was a great </span><span>argument</span><span lang="IN"> happening </span><span>in the living room</span><span lang="IN">, he </span><span>creepped</span> <span>towards </span><span lang="IN">the door</span><span> that was</span><span lang="IN"> standing ajar</span><span> and</span><span lang="IN"> overlooking the living room. </span><span>His f</span><span lang="IN">ather</span><span>, who at once was nice and wise,</span><span lang="IN"><span> was</span></span><span lang="IN"> slapping </span><span>his mom, lost in his anger and rage.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“What you did wrong, now you involved us into this matter!” shouted Mother, she cried. “I don’t care with your affairs, oh for God sake, I really don’t care.”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“Look! I tried to get us all out from this matter! Stop complaining, and get children out from here NOW!”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“But they cursed us! THEY ALREADY CURSED US ALL!!” She shouted again.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span>Castor </span><span lang="IN">froze</span><span> in fear ,</span><span lang="IN"> He was a </span><span>quite </span><span lang="IN">clever</span><span> for a</span><span lang="IN"> five year old boy. </span><span>He figured out</span><span lang="IN"> what happened</span><span> to him</span><span lang="IN"> last night when</span><span> the</span><span lang="IN"> full moon appeared, he woke up outside with</span><span> dried</span><span lang="IN"> blood on his hands and mouth. He felt bad after, as though he ate plates of stale bacon. What curse did h</span><span>is</span><span lang="IN"> mother talk</span><span lang="IN"> about? Whatever it was, it surely gave him a c</span><span>hill</span><span lang="IN"> as he continued to </span><span>eavesdrop</span><span lang="IN">.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">“What are you up to, boy?”</span><span><span> </span>a voice said behind him.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span>Castor </span><span lang="IN">was surprised to death</span><span> as he quickly turned around to see</span><span lang="IN"> his oldest </span><span>brother creeping up to</span><span lang="IN"> him</span><span> and</span><span lang="IN"> peeking to the living room. </span><span>He gave a</span><span lang="IN"> cold expression </span><span>as </span><span lang="IN">he looked at</span><span> Castor</span><span lang="IN">.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">“You never knew, Castor, our life will</span><span> be</span><span lang="IN"> change</span><span>d</span><span lang="IN"> forever.”</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">A glimpse of fear ran through his vein</span><span>s</span><span lang="IN"> as the oldest brother said the most </span><span>frightening</span><span lang="IN"> thing he ever heard.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">H</span><span>is older borther name </span><span lang="IN">was Benuard, the oldest son of Delacroix family. Before it all started, Benuard was so fun and kind until everything changed when Castor started waking up outside house</span><span>,covered </span><span lang="IN">with blood after the full moon night. Benuard had became so wicked and harsh ever since.</span><span> </span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">He gave Castor a evilish grin.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">“Realise it</span><span> now</span><span lang="IN">, Castor, you are destined to be a werewolf,” he said while walking away back upstairs.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">Suddenly everything seemed to </span><span>dissonantly quiet </span><span lang="IN">as Castor lingered in his own fear </span><span>of learning</span><span lang="IN"> the truth of what had he became all this time.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">Castor heard someone’s nearing the door he’d been hiding from, he stood back, as he was transfixed to see who was coming.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“Castor!”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">It was his mother. She looked at his eyes and she knew that something was wrong with him, he knew it.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“I told you to pack up!!!” shouted his father, coming forth nearing the door.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“He knew it! he isn’t supposed to know this thing!” said her mother.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“He is supposed to know all thing, fool! now get them out of here! quick!”</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;"><span lang="IN">Castor’s mother wiped her tears and tried to grab Castor’s hand, but he </span><span>pushed her hand away</span><span lang="IN">. He was frightened, he felt no longer at home. His dad reached his left arm forcefully, “now, you have a choice! Go!”</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">Castor’s mother carried him away, she brought him upstairs. He took a glance to his father, and sudenly he knew that father didn’t mean that way.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">“Papa!” yelled Castor while trying to reach him with his right hand. But his father turned arround and walked away to the living room.<span> </span></span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span><span style="font-size:small;"><span style="font-family:Calibri;">His mother and brother quickly grabbed their things as castor grabbed some of his possessions. They heard a riot coming in the distance as his mother and brother rushed out of the house with Castor close behind. His father stood behind as he watched his family escape towards the docks.<span> </span>They arrived when they met up with Corissa,who was standing near a small boat and ready to go.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">and off they went, with a small boat escaping the house that was in riot as people breaking in the house and burned it down moments later. The fog made the night scary but Corissa seemed so confident enough to lead the way with a yellow light lantern lit the way. Mother and Benuard were oaring the boat slowly. And sudenly the mother stopped oaring, she began to cry. Corissa holded her and cried.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">Castor saw the flames engulfed eliminating the fogs. It was a really deep painful night.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“Papa…..” whispered Castor.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">“It will be a night that will not be forgiven,” whispered Benuard, angrily. He started oaring the boat again, alone.</span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0 0 10pt;"><span lang="IN"><span style="font-size:small;font-family:Calibri;">(copyrighted @2008. Listya Widyasari edited by: BerserkFox)</span></span></p>
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